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Christmas DYK sets
[edit]With Christmas just over four weeks away, I think this is a good time to ask: does DYK want to do sets for Christmas Eve and Christmas Day?
If yes, here are some potential hooks that can be used:
- Template:Did you know nominations/Pflaumentoffel: Food, needs a review
- Template:Did you know nominations/The Christmas Invasion: TV,
currently in Prep 6at SOHA - Template:Did you know nominations/HMT Night Hawk: Ship,
ApprovedSOHA
In addition, these articles are at WP:GAN and could potentially be used as Christmas hooks:
Thoughts about creating this set are welcome below. Z1720 (talk) 15:38, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
- Excellent idea. I did actually see the Christmas Invasion in prep and wondered why it wasn't being saved. Pinging @DoctorWhoFan91, Piotrus, DimensionalFusion, Thriley, and Grimes2: who are involved with the first two noms. (I've been putting off expanding Piri & Tommy for over a year and they did a track called "Christmas Time" if that's of any use?)--Launchballer 15:56, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Nominate it when its ready: if we decide not to use it for this set, the article will still be better. Z1720 (talk) 16:51, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
- It's fine with me - I can review any new XMAS hook if pinged. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:09, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: I'm not really familiar with DYK- should I add somewhere that it should be saved for Christmas (I will read the instructions to DYK more comprehensively later). @Z1720: Great idea. Also, I'm working on another Christmas special- if it gets nominated and passed by then, I can nominate that for DYK too. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 11:26, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- No, what someone needs to do is pull the nom, leave a note, and put it in WP:SOHA. I've done that.--Launchballer 11:39, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'm planning to do a nativity painting. Johnbod (talk) 01:13, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Christmas hooks should go into the "Special occasions" section at the bottom of the WP:DYKN page. Thanks guys! Gatoclass (talk) 14:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- Actually, they should go into the "Special occasions" section at the top of the WP:DYKNA page (direct link: WP:SOHA), and only once they're approved. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:37, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
While not a "Christmassy" hook, it would be nice if Template:Did you know nominations/HMT Night Hawk could run on Christmas Day for the 110th anniversary of her sinking - Dumelow (talk) 20:17, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow: Since the hook mentions Christmas, I think it is appropriate for the set. It will also help us diversity the setZ1720 (talk) 01:11, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
I can work up an article on a Brazilian Krampus species.--Kevmin § 17:51, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Dickinson pumpkin. I just made a Christmas hook for this. Thriley (talk) 21:14, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Austrosphecodes krampus the "Krampus" hook is live and nominated .--Kevmin § 20:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)
- Template:Did you know nominations/Adoration of the Magi in the Snow, a stunning Bruegel painting with pic, is now ready for review. Johnbod (talk) 19:36, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- Now reviewed, needs promoting & moving. Johnbod (talk) 03:53, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- If anyone is looking for a Christmas article, I started Draft:Alvin Greenman. He played Alfred the janitor in Miracle on 34th Street known for his "Make a buck. Make a buck" critique of Christmas commercialism. Thriley (talk) 21:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Is there a reason why Revelation of the Magi was already promoted instead of being held for Christmas? Or to be more appropriate, not held until Epiphany? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:32, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wouldn't mind if Template:Did you know nominations/Christmas: A Biography runs on Christmas Eve if the Christmas Day prep is full. ミラP@Miraclepine 17:20, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've just approved Template:Did you know nominations/National Gingerbread House Competition which might be nice to run in the holiday season - Dumelow (talk) 09:54, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Two sets?
[edit]I just noticed this proposal was for two special sets. I think that's excessive. One would be plenty. RoySmith (talk) 17:48, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- ... that Gail Damerow was described by one magazine as "poultry's Cesar Millan"?
This is more of a sanity check or a strawpoll rather than raising an issue. This was the promoted hook, while the alternative was:
- ... that Gail Damerow's book described by the New York Times as the "authoritative book on ice cream" was created because of the lack of good recipes in her ice cream maker's recipe booklet?
Which is 190 characters, but is beside the point. The reservation I have is I'm not sure if the first hook works if people don't know who Cesar Millan is. I personally know who he is, but many readers may not. So this is more of a strawpoll from the others here: does the hook work without knowing Millan? And is the promoted hook more interesting or a better option than the alternative? Courtesy ping to promoter AirshipJungleman29 and reviewer Toadboy123, although input from uninvolved readers is appreciated. In the interest of transparency: I prefer the other hook, but this is a strawpoll to test consensus, and if consensus is in favor of the promoted hook then I won't object. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer the other hook as well. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 11:18, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I had no clue who the Millan guy is, but I found it interesting. in this case I learnt about two people at once. The other hook works too, but needs significant trimming. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer ALT1. Toadboy123 (talk) 13:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Do you know of a way to trim ALT1? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- ... that Gail Damerow wrote the "authoritative book on ice cream" because of the lack of good recipes in her ice cream maker's recipe booklet? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- But looking at the source, I see that it actually says "one of the most authoritative books on ice cream making", which is quite different in a couple of ways. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:45, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Do you know of a way to trim ALT1? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I prefer the original. It's more clicky. Also, it becomes hilarious once you know who Millan is, because the idea of someone being a 'chicken whisperer' is wonderfully absurd. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 05:59, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is now in Queue and it doesn't seem like we've reached a consensus on what hook to use, although multiple editors did state a preference for ALT1. Should it run with the current hook (i.e. status quo), or should the hook be bumped off to a later prep to give more time to make a decision? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:22, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- ... that George W. Bush quoted from the Quran in a speech he delivered as president of the United States?
@AirshipJungleman29: I'm surprised none of the hooks mention that it was six days after 9/11, which seems an essential detail for me, and one which could replace "as president of the United States"
: I included the detail "as president of the United States" in case it would be necessary identifying information for readers potentially familiar with the United States generally but not individual presidents specifically, but you make a strong point in favor of mentioning the 9/11 context. While I think the current hook still works as a hook, I would also support something like that (something like "... that George W. Bush quoted from the Quran in a speech he delivered six days after the September 11 attacks?"), but I don't know if that'd require going through a review process all over again. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 03:26, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Toolbox entry domain expired
[edit]The Character Counter from the DYK toolbox currently states that the domain has expired. Departure– (talk) 16:44, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm inclined to just delete that from the toolbox. AFAIK User:Shubinator/DYKcheck has taken over that functionality. RoySmith (talk) 16:48, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'll be honest: as someone who's been on DYK for years I wasn't even aware that particular link existed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:02, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Removed. RoySmith (talk) 14:23, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Sdkb I see you replaced this with wordcounter.net/character-count. The very next entry, wordcount.toolforge.org, does exactly the same thing. Why do we need both? RoySmith (talk) 15:29, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, I missed this convo/didn't check out the links closely enough. I'm fine with them being consolidated, although the label should perhaps be changed so that it indicates it's both a character and word counter. And I'd suggest checking out both links to see which one seems to function best/be most stable and choose it. Sdkb talk 15:41, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Oh, i just removed the word counter because word count is irrelevant for DYK purposes, but I can restore it? theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 15:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Given that we have User:Shubinator/DYKcheck, I don't see that we need either of wordcounter.net or wordcount.toolforge.org, but if there's a desire to keep one, I'd certainly opt for the one that's hosted at toolforge. RoySmith (talk) 15:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would recommend leaving one of them in the box, as not everyone will have/want the User:Shubinator/DYKcheck mod if they are not a regular DYK contributor. We should have options for new DYK contributors outside of saying "Well to do that you need to downlaods this mod to your account that you may never use again.--Kevmin § 17:45, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- The problem with that is both of these tools give you the wrong answer. It's not going to be a fun experience for a new contributor (or reviewer) if one of those tools says it's long enough and then somebody else comes along with, "No, you dummy, you're not supposed to count infoboxes, image captions, block quotes, references, etc. It really is too short." RoySmith (talk) 17:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Can someone make and host a small tool for the purpose? I could host it if someone would code it. ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 17:55, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm currently (but slowly) working on a dyk-tools update. I'll add that as a todo. RoySmith (talk) 17:58, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I actually managed to whip this up real quick: https://penguinpaul.github.io/DYK-Prose/
- Example: https://penguinpaul.github.io/DYK-Prose/?page=William%20Hamm%20Jr.
- Github repo: https://github.com/PenguinPaul/DYK-Prose ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 18:29, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm currently (but slowly) working on a dyk-tools update. I'll add that as a todo. RoySmith (talk) 17:58, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Can someone make and host a small tool for the purpose? I could host it if someone would code it. ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 17:55, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- The problem with that is both of these tools give you the wrong answer. It's not going to be a fun experience for a new contributor (or reviewer) if one of those tools says it's long enough and then somebody else comes along with, "No, you dummy, you're not supposed to count infoboxes, image captions, block quotes, references, etc. It really is too short." RoySmith (talk) 17:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would recommend leaving one of them in the box, as not everyone will have/want the User:Shubinator/DYKcheck mod if they are not a regular DYK contributor. We should have options for new DYK contributors outside of saying "Well to do that you need to downlaods this mod to your account that you may never use again.--Kevmin § 17:45, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Given that we have User:Shubinator/DYKcheck, I don't see that we need either of wordcounter.net or wordcount.toolforge.org, but if there's a desire to keep one, I'd certainly opt for the one that's hosted at toolforge. RoySmith (talk) 15:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Oh, i just removed the word counter because word count is irrelevant for DYK purposes, but I can restore it? theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 15:42, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, I missed this convo/didn't check out the links closely enough. I'm fine with them being consolidated, although the label should perhaps be changed so that it indicates it's both a character and word counter. And I'd suggest checking out both links to see which one seems to function best/be most stable and choose it. Sdkb talk 15:41, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Sdkb I see you replaced this with wordcounter.net/character-count. The very next entry, wordcount.toolforge.org, does exactly the same thing. Why do we need both? RoySmith (talk) 15:29, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Removed. RoySmith (talk) 14:23, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
That's already happening though, I've seen a couple instances in the past month or so, and saying having NO option is at all to use is better experience doesnt parse. inaccurate (and noted as such) but present is better then telling new reviewers to hand count or download a random addon. I used the character counters for a decade before shubs tool came and rarely had issues with getting accurate enough counts.--Kevmin § 18:33, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Older nominations needing DYK reviewers
[edit]The previous list was archived a couple of hours ago, so I've created a new list of 31 nominations that need reviewing in the Older nominations section of the Nominations page, covering everything through November 16. We have a total of 289 nominations, of which 174 have been approved, a gap of 115 nominations that has decreased by 29 over the past 6 days. Thanks to everyone who reviews these and any other nominations!
More than one month old
October 13: Template:Did you know nominations/Anastasia SomozaOctober 15: Template:Did you know nominations/Ratnākara- October 18: Template:Did you know nominations/Luo Shiwen (second opinion requested)
October 19: Template:Did you know nominations/Izvestiya Soveta rabochikh i soldatskikh deputatov goroda AskhabadaOctober 20: Template:Did you know nominations/Mwene MujiOctober 22: Template:Did you know nominations/Revant Himatsingka- October 24: Template:Did you know nominations/A Nail Clipper Romance (second opinion requested)
October 28: Template:Did you know nominations/Chernobyl Reactors 5 and 6- October 31: Template:Did you know nominations/Gifted (2022 novella)
- November 1: Template:Did you know nominations/Tel al-Sultan attack
November 3: Template:Did you know nominations/Moe's BooksNovember 3: Template:Did you know nominations/2023 European Athletics Indoor Championships – Women's 400 metres- November 4: Template:Did you know nominations/Clifton House School (two articles)
- November 4: Template:Did you know nominations/Pro-Fatimid conspiracy against Saladin
- November 5: Template:Did you know nominations/Gohobi
November 7: Template:Did you know nominations/Petergofsky District- November 7: Template:Did you know nominations/Bunt sind schon die Wälder
- November 8: Template:Did you know nominations/Death of Milton King
November 8: Template:Did you know nominations/Canaanite ivory combNovember 8: Template:Did you know nominations/Jim Rivaldo- November 9: Template:Did you know nominations/The Heart Knows its Own Bitterness (Talmud) (second opinion requested)
Other nominations
- November 10: Template:Did you know nominations/Planting a Rainbow
November 10: Template:Did you know nominations/Nazareth Hall Preparatory Seminary- November 10: Template:Did you know nominations/Hold Your Hand (film)
November 11: Template:Did you know nominations/Artificial intelligence rhetoricNovember 12: Template:Did you know nominations/2007 Greensburg tornado- November 13: Template:Did you know nominations/Austin Staats
November 14: Template:Did you know nominations/Mother SolomonNovember 15: Template:Did you know nominations/Moses sees Rabbi Akiva (Menachot 29b)November 15: Template:Did you know nominations/Gruppentheorie und Quantenmechanik- November 16: Template:Did you know nominations/GNX (album)
- November 16: Template:Did you know nominations/Marzēaḥ
Please remember to cross off entries, including the date, as you finish reviewing them (unless you're asking for further review), even if the review was not an approval. Please do not remove them entirely. Many thanks! BlueMoonset (talk) 20:15, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
I would like to request second opinions regarding the suitability of ALT1 and its hook facts, which for context reads:
- ... that gay political consultant Jim Rivaldo "used to think that all gay people were hairdressers"?
Although the more interesting hook among the two options proposed, I am worried that it might be considered offensive without the context provided in the article. Given that I am not LGBT, I'm not sure if I'm the best person to determine if the hook as currently written is suitable or not. I would like to ask for second opinions and suggestions on the hook, particularly from our LGBT regulars, if the hook as currently written is acceptable or not. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:14, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- If we want a slightly more positive focus, then perhaps:
- ... that gay political consultant Jim Rivaldo found that there were "gay lawyers [and] gay businessmen" after moving to San Francisco?
- However, I don't find the current hook to be offensive, as it's pretty clear that Rivaldo viewed that presumption as inaccurate. Maybe I'm only saying that because I'm not gay, though. Based5290 :3 (talk) 04:13, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- ... that Seunghan (pictured) was forced out of his band because of a cigarette and a kiss?
Does this hook as currently written not violate WP:DYKBLP, especially with the context given in the article? Pinging nominator RachelTensions, reviewer Prince of Erebor, and promoter AirshipJungleman29. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:21, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Only if you agree that a cigarette and a kiss are “negative aspects of a living person” instead of just normal human activities. The story and the public’s reaction to it are a major part of his notability and a large portion of the article. RachelTensions (talk) 12:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- So far as I can tell, his notability comprises nothing other than his membership and unfair dismissal. I don't think a hook about his dismissal is unduly negative.--Launchballer 12:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with Rachel and Launchballer. I do not think his dismissal should be perceived as negative, since it was not related to misconduct (like drug abuse or something), and the article clearly states that it was widely seen as an unfair decision by the company, and he received support from other celebrities, the press, and fans. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fair enough. This was intended to be an inquiry, so my concerns have been resolved. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:11, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with Rachel and Launchballer. I do not think his dismissal should be perceived as negative, since it was not related to misconduct (like drug abuse or something), and the article clearly states that it was widely seen as an unfair decision by the company, and he received support from other celebrities, the press, and fans. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:12, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- So far as I can tell, his notability comprises nothing other than his membership and unfair dismissal. I don't think a hook about his dismissal is unduly negative.--Launchballer 12:50, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- ... that no one slept on SZA's 2023 sleeper hit?
The references that are cited for this hook in the prep's quirky slot have to do with various people saying thing like "at that point, nobody can sleep on that song anymore", referring to the song's climb up the charts. However, the clear implication from such a statement is that there were people out there who were sleeping on it before then—indeed, that's where the "sleeper hit" designation came from—so the "no one slept on" claim in the hook is dubious at best. Pinging nominator Elias / PSA, reviewer Thriley, and promoter Royiswariii. Looking at the nomination page, both this hook (ALT1) and the original hook have this same problem; the choices left seem to be replacing the hook in Prep 6 with ALT2 or finding a new hook altogether.
- ALT2: ... that SZA's "Snooze" happens to be a sleeper hit?
—BlueMoonset (talk) 05:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hello, BlueMoonset! I think ALT2 can work.
hold a moment.Done Royiswariii Talk! 14:34, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
@AirshipJungleman29: I noticed you promoted Bob Hainlen (Template:Did you know nominations/Bob Hainlen) to prep area 2, scheduled to run on December 12. I had previously requested in an above section ("Date request") that it appear on December 18 as a special occasion hook, which received support from the only two commenters (Launchballer / Narutolovehinata5). Do you think this could be swapped out so that it appears on the 18th as requested? Thanks, BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Kicked it back as requested.--Launchballer 23:17, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
@Epicgenius, Cardofk, and AirshipJungleman29: I was surprised to see that this hook was the one promoted, because I find it to be the least interesting of the nomination's (it depends on knowing who Laurence Olivier is). I suggest swapping with ALT4.--Launchballer 22:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Shows how tastes differ—ALT4 is the least interesting for me. I'd be surprised if any major Manhattan hotel hadn't hosted royalty over the years. I'd suspect that more people than you think know of Olivier—I remember chatting to a few elderly Taiwanese women who spoke no English but still managed to get across their undying adoration for him to me. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 01:24, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that the hooks are all roughly the same level of interesting, which is mildly, being somewhat hampered by plainness. If I can propose some alternatives:
- ... that an intersection outside the Carlyle Hotel became named after a pianist who frequently performed there?
- ... that Rona Jaffe's mother suggested a luxury New York hotel be named after a controversial Scottish essayist?
- ... that even though the Carlyle Hotel gained tenants throughout the Great Depression, it was foreclosed upon multiple times?
- ... that while maintaining low rents helped save the Carlyle Hotel in the Great Depression, they were massively raised shortly after the Second World War?
- ... that the Carlyle Hotel is an Art Deco skyscraper, but has parts variously designed after Westminster Cathedral and Topkapı Palace?
- And do we have any more information on
A new law limited the heights of apartment buildings in the area, although Ginsberg's structure was exempt from this legislation, ensuring it would be taller than all of the other structures
, because while "... that a legal exemption meant the Carlyle Hotel could be taller than all other buildings in the area, at a time when New York City was limiting skyscrapers?" is pretty interesting, I'd want to properly fact check it – and more info on the exemption (hotel ordnance rather than apartment?) could also prove interesting. Kingsif (talk) 02:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)- @Kingsif, thanks for the suggestions. Regarding the last hook, actually, the neighborhood (not the city) was limiting skyscrapers at the time. I had chosen to not propose this hook since height restrictions are a typical aspect of zoning. NYC still allowed skyscrapers but they were subject to the 1916 Zoning Resolution, which still allowed towers of theoretically unlimited height as long as they were not restricted by neighborhood zoning.
- . Epicgenius (talk) 11:53, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- So, "... that a legal exemption meant the Carlyle Hotel could be taller than all other buildings in its height-controlled New York City neighborhood?"
- Height restrictions are common, it's the exemption that is interesting (and somewhat the NYC, famous internationally for skyscrapers, has both), but I thought readers would prefer if there was some meatier information about the what or why. Kingsif (talk) 23:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
The first, second and fifth hooks proposed by Kingsif above all have an acceptable level of interest IMO, the others not so much. Gatoclass (talk) 16:56, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- The legal exemption hook would work best if it was a picture hook. For the other options I think the first is better: the second may be better to others, but it might need reliance on knowing who Rona Jaffe is. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:19, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- I mean, it is a picture hook, it's currently on the main page. While hook reviews in here are great, having only a few days to discuss generally means either no changes or bumping the hook back. Kingsif (talk) 21:51, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
@Generalissima and Di (they-them): I can't find the hook fact in either article, am I missing it?--Launchballer 22:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yangginu "While under Hada authority, Yangginu and his brother schemed to avenge Cukungge, and grew their power."
- Wan (khan) "Cukungge's sons, beile Yangginu and Cinggiyanu, sought to regain the independence of the Yehe and avenge their father. They gradually began to assert their autonomy, until Yangginu managed to firmly break off both the Yehe and the Ula from the Hūlun confederation." Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 23:04, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's the sentence beginning "But as the brothers" in the source, right? Should be fine.--Launchballer 23:17, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
@Prince of Erebor and Crisco 1492: I see close paraphrasing in the article that should be fixed.--Launchballer 22:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Launchballer, I ran the article through Earwig and checked all 10 sources listed there. It appears that the only potential close paraphrasing is the phrase "vivid depiction of Taoist funeral rituals" from the Screen International review. If this is what you are referring to, I have fixed it by adding the missing quotation marks. If you are referring to another source, could you please let me know which one contains the issue? —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 00:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
@Sahaib and Dwkaminski: Really not liking some of the sources being used in this BLP; Fox News and Rolling Stone are red at WP:RSP for politics, and the bible's listing of Newsweek doesn't exactly fill me with confidence. I also see some CLOP in the article.--Launchballer 22:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: fixed the sources. Earwig shows that the article is fine in terms of paraphrasing. Sahaib (talk) 23:31, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Whatever I was seeing then, I can't see now. Resolved.--Launchballer 23:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
@Bogger and MaranoFan: This hook uses an unattributed quote. This should be rewritten.--Launchballer 22:52, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- OK, how about ALT0A:
- "... that the Child Law Project reports on Ireland's child care system?" Source: https://www.rte.ie/news/2024/1104/1478889-child-protection-report/
- ? Bogger (talk) 08:45, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fine by me; howver I can't edit that set any more. I'm pinging the admins at WP:ERRORS anyway so I've pointed this out there so I only have to ping them once.--Launchballer 11:32, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Wang Hanlun +1
[edit]These are mine, so new eyes needed. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Needs an end-of-sentence citation.--Launchballer 02:50, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- The sentence in the article
Wang used some of the profits from Revenge of an Actress to finalize her divorce, then left the film industry
needs a citation. I'm guessing its the same as the one at the end of the paragraph, but we need one for the sentence. Also, the hook saysused the proceeds
which makes it sound like she used all of the money, as opposed to the article'ssome of the profits
. RoySmith (talk) 02:51, 11 December 2024 (UTC)- Added the Wei reference to the end of the sentence. As for "some", I believe that the proceeds is not misleading ("I used my lotto winnings to buy a house" doesn't preclude one from also buying a car, for example, or groceries) and better meets the terms of WP:DYKHOOKSTYLE ("... do keep hooks short and to the point.") — Chris Woodrich (talk) 11:41, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Just going to note that this is the last one holding things up. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 11:44, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- My concern has been resolved, however it may be worth changing it to "proceeds from" instead of "the proceeds of".--Launchballer 11:59, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done and queued. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:01, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- My concern has been resolved, however it may be worth changing it to "proceeds from" instead of "the proceeds of".--Launchballer 11:59, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Hook fact needs a citation immediately after the statement. Pinging CurryTime7-24, hahnchen, and AirshipJungleman29 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. CurryTime7-24, if you could just repeat the paragraph end citation immediately after the hook sentence, it would fulfil the WP:DYKHFC criteria. Feel free to remove it after DYK. - hahnchen 09:47, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've done the duplication, just to expedite things a bit. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 11:44, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Feels a bit advertorial given that he just launched the line in October. Another hook would be ideal. Tagging 2601AC47, Darth Stabro, and Sohom_Datta. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I will note that I did not consider it to advertorial given how negative our article is about him. How about something like:
- ... that Dr Disrespect's first videos featured a bombastic "champion" trash-talking game-play footage? Sohom (talk) 02:53, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I like this, and it focuses more on what he's known for. ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 03:03, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- "I don’t care what they say about me as long as they spell my name right" RoySmith (talk) 03:05, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Replaced the hook. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 11:43, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Not seeing "several hours" in the article. Citing the time of the first EF3 would better support this hook. Nomination had ALT1a, "... that Cordova, Alabama, was hit by two tornadoes on the same day, the second of which was on the ground for more than two hours?" which is better supported. Tagging EF5, Sammi Brie, and Royiswariii. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- There's a good case that it's more precise, too, so I approve. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:13, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've tagged this "lead too short", as two sentences does not a lead make for an article of 6k characters. Tagging Lazman321, The Bushranger, and AirshipJungleman29 (Lazman is on Wikibreak, so another editor may need to address this). — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492: Worked on the lede some, is this better? - The Bushranger One ping only 02:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks The Bushranger. Three sentences is a bit better, and it does cover all sections. 02:29, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- The ship wasn't an aircraft carrier yet, meaning this probably needs flagging. Also, the hook focuses attention on the ship and not congress. Pinging Maximilian775, Darth Stabro, Johnbod, and AirshipJungleman29 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:21, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- The date of 1935 is given, so I think this is fine. But a "later" could be worked in somewhere. Please link to the nom, not the article! Johnbod (talk) 02:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Johnbod. Looking at the offerings at the nom, none of them had the same issue; this appears to have been introduced as a result of efforts to shorten the hook. Personally, I'd use "had been used" instead of "was used" for the same effect. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:32, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I did approve all the hooks. The others lacked the date, which I felt was important. As I said, "later" can be worked in, or "had been used". Johnbod (talk) 02:43, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I'm fine with any modifications like that. ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 03:02, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, I did approve all the hooks. The others lacked the date, which I felt was important. As I said, "later" can be worked in, or "had been used". Johnbod (talk) 02:43, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- The date of 1935 is given, so I think this is fine. But a "later" could be worked in somewhere. Please link to the nom, not the article! Johnbod (talk) 02:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Pulled hook
[edit]Hi Gatoclass, I see that you pulled the hook for Template:Did you know nominations/Third Cathedral of Saint Paul (Minnesota) from Prep 4 for "multiple issues" - what issues were there and how can they be remedied? Right now the nomination is in limbo, not appearing in Approved, Awaiting Approval, or preps, and I want to make sure it doesn't vanish. (cc: Generalissima, AirshipJungleman29) ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 15:55, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it took me two hours to verify that set and I had to take a break. I will restore the nom to the awaiting approval page shortly, but if you want to know what the issues are now, they are 1/ that the Hamm article is only a x4 expansion by my count (needs to be x5), and 2/ there are discrepancies in the sources, with at least two of them, including the NRHP listing, stating that the Hamm building was built on the site of the second cathedral rather than the third. So you will need to find a way to either reconcile the sources or rewrite the hook and Hamm article appropriately - thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 16:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, will reply over there. ~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 16:51, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
@AirshipJungleman29, BeanieFan11, and Thriley: the hook verifies, but it's long and complicated. Can we come up with something simpler? RoySmith (talk) 16:04, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't know, maybe something like ... that in a 2024 game, college football player Jordan Watkins scored a record five touchdowns – even though he had never before had more than one? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- How about "... that having never previously scored more than one touchdown in a game, Jordan Watkins broke the record by scoring five?" RoySmith (talk) 20:19, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- There's a problem with both of these: "the record" or "a record" is basically undefined in terms of what record is being talked about. In fact, as the "long and complicated" hook currently in prep is careful to state, it is a record of the school he plays for rather than a league or national record, and specifically for receptions at Ole Miss. The second of the suggestions might be sufficiently modified by changing "broke the record" to "broke an Ole Miss record" (adding a wikilink for "Ole Miss" would also be advisable if this is used). Since there could be a separate record involving total touchdowns as opposed to receiving touchdowns—you might want to check that—any other wording would need to be carefully parsed. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:56, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- The point of a hook is to pique somebody's interest enough to get them to click the link. There's no need to cover every detail. That's what the article is for. RoySmith (talk) 14:20, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Since you have an issue with the hook and are a sysop (and thus it can't be pulled or bumped by another editor), maybe the hook needs bumping or pulling until discussion clears? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:39, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- We've still got a couple of days to sort this out. And even so, I'm not excited about pulling a hook for something that's purely a style issue. RoySmith (talk) 14:55, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe a modification of one I suggested above: ... that in a 2024 game, college football player Jordan Watkins scored an Ole Miss-record five receiving touchdowns – even though he had never before had more than one? BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:10, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RoySmith This is going to be promoted in the next set. Should BeanieFan's reword be subbed in? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:12, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- I've done that. I still think it's kind of verbose because it's trying to cram in too many details, but I guess it's better than the original. RoySmith (talk) 13:25, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- @RoySmith This is going to be promoted in the next set. Should BeanieFan's reword be subbed in? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:12, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe a modification of one I suggested above: ... that in a 2024 game, college football player Jordan Watkins scored an Ole Miss-record five receiving touchdowns – even though he had never before had more than one? BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:10, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- We've still got a couple of days to sort this out. And even so, I'm not excited about pulling a hook for something that's purely a style issue. RoySmith (talk) 14:55, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Since you have an issue with the hook and are a sysop (and thus it can't be pulled or bumped by another editor), maybe the hook needs bumping or pulling until discussion clears? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:39, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- The point of a hook is to pique somebody's interest enough to get them to click the link. There's no need to cover every detail. That's what the article is for. RoySmith (talk) 14:20, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- There's a problem with both of these: "the record" or "a record" is basically undefined in terms of what record is being talked about. In fact, as the "long and complicated" hook currently in prep is careful to state, it is a record of the school he plays for rather than a league or national record, and specifically for receptions at Ole Miss. The second of the suggestions might be sufficiently modified by changing "broke the record" to "broke an Ole Miss record" (adding a wikilink for "Ole Miss" would also be advisable if this is used). Since there could be a separate record involving total touchdowns as opposed to receiving touchdowns—you might want to check that—any other wording would need to be carefully parsed. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:56, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- How about "... that having never previously scored more than one touchdown in a game, Jordan Watkins broke the record by scoring five?" RoySmith (talk) 20:19, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Prep 6/Queue 6
[edit]Any chance of getting Template:Did you know nominations/Packers–Seahawks rivalry into queue 6? I had put a special date request in, but it never got added to the holding area. Thanks! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:24, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007 and Di (they-them): Possibly showing my ignorance, but I'd worry that fact could date; they could conceivably play each other again. Got anything else?--Launchballer 23:57, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies, I forgot that that rule was repealed last month. Promoted.--Launchballer 00:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Launchballer, for my own benefit, what rule are you referencing? The Packers and Seahawks play each other often (which is why there is a rivalry page!), I just wanted the rivalry page to be on DYK during the game, as it will likely lead to more hits. Thanks! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:57, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- They're talking about the "unlikely to change" rule, which said that a hook fact must be "unlikely to change". It was criticized for being too impractical and vague, so it was recently changed to instead say that it is an "established" or "definite" fact. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:10, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5, I am now grasping the concern. So fundamentally the fact will change when the game starts, because the teams will have played each other 25 times. Is there any opposition to adding a qualifier, like "prior to today" or "before 2024"? So it could ready "...that even though the Green Bay Packers and Seattle Seahawks have only played each other 24 times before 2024, 4 of those games have come in the playoffs?" « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:27, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- The rule itself has since been repealed/changed so there's nothing to worry about anymore in this case. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:56, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Narutolovehinata5, I am now grasping the concern. So fundamentally the fact will change when the game starts, because the teams will have played each other 25 times. Is there any opposition to adding a qualifier, like "prior to today" or "before 2024"? So it could ready "...that even though the Green Bay Packers and Seattle Seahawks have only played each other 24 times before 2024, 4 of those games have come in the playoffs?" « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:27, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- They're talking about the "unlikely to change" rule, which said that a hook fact must be "unlikely to change". It was criticized for being too impractical and vague, so it was recently changed to instead say that it is an "established" or "definite" fact. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:10, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Launchballer, for my own benefit, what rule are you referencing? The Packers and Seahawks play each other often (which is why there is a rivalry page!), I just wanted the rivalry page to be on DYK during the game, as it will likely lead to more hits. Thanks! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:57, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies, I forgot that that rule was repealed last month. Promoted.--Launchballer 00:30, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
This nomination by Mjks28 was pulled from prep on October 20 due to hook issues (after a discussion on this DYK talk page) by Crisco 1492 for hook issues after having originally been promoted on October 11. However, it was never retranscluded onto the Nominations page after the pull. The article was originally moved into article space on August 20, nominated on August 29 (accepted as being two days late, as allowed by DYK), and passed on August 30, but it's now over three and a half months since its original nomination. Should we allow it a short period of time, say seven days, for a valid hook to be found and approved, or is it simply too late for it to be considered at this point? Any thoughts? Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:38, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- If there is an issue on our end (i.e., those who prepare preps and queues), I feel like the article should be given a chance. Good catch. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:40, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Went above the two-month discretionary limit through no fault of its own but rather a fault of DYK and so it should be given a chance. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I agree. I've retranscluded it. Ball's in the nominator's court now.--Launchballer 00:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Timoshenko the cat
[edit]Currently in P2:
- ... that a cat, Timoshenko, joined the British submarine HMS Unruffled on twenty patrols in World War II?
Who cares what the cat's name was? Surely the hook should just read:
- ... that a cat joined the British submarine HMS Unruffled on twenty patrols in World War II? Gatoclass (talk) 23:29, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- It's a fascinating question, actually. The reason why the cat shares its name with Semyon Timoshenko is historically interesting. The Russians and the British were allied in their fight against the Nazis and the cat was named in honor of the real Timoshenko after he began mounting major counter-defenses during the German invasion of the Soviet Union. I think the cat was named Timoshenko by the crew of the sub after the counter-offensive in Rostov, I'm not sure. I suspect it was a morale booster, and with a cat named Timoshenko walking around the sub, it was a reminder that the war was not yet lost, there was hope. So there's a lot of history here, and for that reason, the name is interesting. Others may disagree. Viriditas (talk) 00:06, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fine, but then that should be explained in the hook, otherwise it's a complete puzzle why the name is included. Suggest changing it to:
- * ... that a cat named after a Soviet general joined the British submarine HMS Unruffled on twenty patrols in World War II? Gatoclass (talk) 00:21, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- My own thinking: less is more, and such "puzzlement" as you put it might lead to more people visiting the article. Also, not too keen on linking before the main article, but if you unlinked it, it would probably still work. Viriditas (talk) 00:27, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Delinked, thanks. I cannot agree however that adding the name of the cat adds anything of value to the hook, because the name alone will be completely meaningless to 99.99% of readers. Gatoclass (talk) 00:33, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- No objection to your new version, but I think what you and I consider "meaningless" might be different. It sounds like you oppose names in hooks, and I can understand that as I tend to oppose dates. Viriditas (talk) 00:40, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- In general, I oppose names in hooks for non-notable persons, or to put it another way, names that cannot be linked to an article. Otherwise, what purpose do they serve? They are just conveying a piece of useless trivia. There's another reason I oppose them as well, but stating that might lead to another debate which I'd prefer not to have right now - cheers, Gatoclass (talk) 00:46, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Anyhow, I have substituted the above version - thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 06:28, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- No objection to your new version, but I think what you and I consider "meaningless" might be different. It sounds like you oppose names in hooks, and I can understand that as I tend to oppose dates. Viriditas (talk) 00:40, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Delinked, thanks. I cannot agree however that adding the name of the cat adds anything of value to the hook, because the name alone will be completely meaningless to 99.99% of readers. Gatoclass (talk) 00:33, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- My own thinking: less is more, and such "puzzlement" as you put it might lead to more people visiting the article. Also, not too keen on linking before the main article, but if you unlinked it, it would probably still work. Viriditas (talk) 00:27, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Fen Juhua
[edit]Also in P2:
- ... that Fen Juhua, the "first of the lady knights in the Chinese cinema", fought for love?
- appears to be a clear breach of WP:DYKFICTION. Pinging nominator User:Crisco 1492, reviewer User:Prince of Erebor and promoter User:AirshipJungleman29. Gatoclass (talk) 00:13, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Suggested alt:
- ALT1: ... that Fen Juhua has been described as the "first of the lady knights in the Chinese cinema" for her role in a 1925 film? Gatoclass (talk) 01:51, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- DYKFICTION reads "If the subject of the hook is a creative work, the hook must be focused on a real-world fact." She was first of the lady knights in Chinese cinema, per Teo; that is the crux of the hook. If you'd prefer ALT2 ... that Fen Juhua became the "first of the lady knights in the Chinese cinema" after fighting for love in a 1925 film?, that keeps both elements while still keeping the link grounded as "a film". — Chris Woodrich (talk) 05:35, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- That's fine by me - substituted. Gatoclass (talk) 06:20, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
René Vallon (nom)
[edit]- ... that René Vallon (pictured) achieved the first flight and was the first flight-related death in China?
@Crisco 1492, ProfGray, and AirshipJungleman29: I think this hook is grammatically ambiguous on whether the first flight
was the first flight anywhere or the first flight in China. (And this is more of a nitpick, but is it idiomatic to say that someone was
a death?) jlwoodwa (talk) 21:47, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- If you don't mind, would you please offer a suggested edit for the hook? It's been discussed a lot. (Btw, if a reader wonders if that's the first flight anywhere, will they wonder why they've never heard of Vallon and, hmm, they'll go to the wikipedia page on the Wright brothers.) ProfGray (talk) 22:05, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Adding commas after "flight" and "death" would make it unambiguous. jlwoodwa (talk) 22:15, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Note that I've moved this hook to prep 5 to prevent four consecutive black and white images. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:36, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Technically it would have been two, as the Horn of Plenty item is a colour image of a mostly B&W composition. But that's nitpicking; no worries from me. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:39, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
Raul Meza Jr. (nom)
[edit]- ... that serial killer Raul Meza Jr. began using drugs at age eight?
@Swinub, It is a wonderful world, and AirshipJungleman29: I think this might violate WP:DYKBLP. jlwoodwa (talk) 21:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- How Jlwoodwa? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:21, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, there's... really not much BLP issues where an individual's notability is limited to the negative things they've done. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:41, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but DYKBLP applies even to people primarily known for negative reasons. DYKBLP states that hooks should not unduly focus on a negative aspect about a living person. Would focusing on how this person, regardless of who they are, did drugs at the age of eight, count as due? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:11, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, there's... really not much BLP issues where an individual's notability is limited to the negative things they've done. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:41, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- With no response from the nominator and reviewer I've gone ahead and pulled it. For what it's worth, even if Meza wasn't a living person the hook would probably still be a bad idea. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:16, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- This is my article and thus requires another set of eyes. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:50, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- AGF verified. Gatoclass (talk) 00:00, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hook says "up to" ten, article says "at least" ten, and source says 22(!). What's right? Pinging EF5, Departure–, and AirshipJungleman29 (may need adoption; EF is on wikibreak. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 02:50, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- The text on the page has 8 entries for satellite tornadoes - of which, two mention other satellites within the same entries. The confusion is likely because the list includes all tornadoes from that day of the Tornado outbreak of May 4–6, 2007. Departure– (talk) 03:16, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Okay, and the table shows exactly ten. The numbers aren't numbering. Would it be safe to just drop the "at least" and "up to"? — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:19, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't see why not. I only see ten mentioned in the source, unless there's a different source listed on the article. Departure– (talk) 03:28, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Okay, and the table shows exactly ten. The numbers aren't numbering. Would it be safe to just drop the "at least" and "up to"? — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:19, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- The text on the page has 8 entries for satellite tornadoes - of which, two mention other satellites within the same entries. The confusion is likely because the list includes all tornadoes from that day of the Tornado outbreak of May 4–6, 2007. Departure– (talk) 03:16, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I wrote these, so a second set of eyes will be needed. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:07, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- AGF verified. Gatoclass (talk) 03:19, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- I promoted to prep; second pair of eyes needed. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:07, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- . Verified. Gatoclass (talk) 03:29, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Lede needs to be beefed up. I've tagged the article. Pinging Darth Stabro, Generalissima, and Gatoclass. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:07, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, Darth Stabro. Tag removed. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 03:44, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Nazi crimes against children
[edit]Currently in P3:
- ... that Nazi crimes against children, such as kidnapping, euthanasia, and mass murder, resulted in more than two million victims?
There are some issues with this hook. Firstly, "victims" do not only include those killed, and the way the hook is phrased conflates the different categories of victims.
Secondly, the article states that more than 2 million Polish children lost their lives in World War II - but were they all killed in crimes, or is this the total number of children who lost their lives from all causes? Also, since this number refers only to Polish children, shouldn't the hook have "in Poland alone" appended (assuming they were all crime victims)?
So I'm strongly inclined to pull this hook until the issues are sorted. Pinging the nominator User:Piotrus for comment; any other comments welcome, thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 11:49, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Satellite tornadoes
[edit]Currently in Q1:
- ... that the 2007 Greensburg tornado had ten smaller tornadoes rotating around it?
Well sure, what tornado doesn't rotate? Wouldn't the more appropriate word be "orbiting", per the satellite tornado article?
Pinging nominator User:EF5 - Gatoclass (talk) 11:57, 15 December 2024 (UTC)